Emergency medical services in a world gone weird.
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Reva the Scarf 11th May 2014, 12:46 AM edit delete
any feedback with the lettering would be much appreciated...still trying about ten different things with it. Thanks!
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KAM 11th May 2014, 2:41 AM edit delete reply
KAM
Don't change the font size every panel. Keep it consistent. The smaller font is verging on hard to read territory.

Also the random bolding of words is not your friend. Only use it for important things.

Cute artwork! :-)
Brome 11th May 2014, 1:34 PM edit delete reply
The lettering is a bit on the small side, you might benefit from making the comic page taller with the same number of panels, just sized up and arranged differently so that the text is easier to read.
Torn 13th May 2014, 10:08 AM edit delete reply
I'm liking the setup so far, it's really different from the norm.

I agree with the previous comments though, the bold words do kind of throw me off. I can see how you intended it to show the main character's emphasis but I'm afraid it's a little too much. Also, it takes a bit of effort to read the second panel, messing up the flow. I actually only just now figured out what the text under "proper hygiene" said, was going to use it for example but while I was typing it out my wheel of fortune skills kicked in and I solved the puzzle.

I'm hoping you continue though! I keep coming back hoping to catch the update. ^-^
Guest 24th Sep 2014, 11:12 PM edit delete reply
higher res maybe? or at least a way to zoom in and not have it get distorted
triforce fandom 14th Feb 2017, 10:12 AM edit delete reply
my Housepets vibes are tingling